|Reviews for Seeping night|
| Maisha Mafuriko chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Ahh and so too you are a person of the evengingtide as night descends...
M the scent of the smoky embers giving warmth as raindrops from vast the heavens meets with the earth.
~Connie aka Maisha
| D.H. L'Orange chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
ah... and yet another lovely poem! (you've got a secret stash in your sock drawer, eh?)
loved the concept of this poem... and these lines especially caught me
" Swallowed by the dark rain wall"
"slicing pinions among the trees"
"the hiss of raindrops parting"
"resin scented smoke is borne"