I could really hear the beatles singing this song! So cool! :)

wow.. really good... i like the rhyme scheme a lot!keep up the good writing!

Wow...this is sensational. John Lennon was an incredible man and this definitely pays homage to him...it's going on my favorites. Great job.

this is going on my fav's. it's an excellent tribute, and it's very apt.

lennon is a visionary legend, the beatles were a psycedelic experience and revolution is the word on my lips at the moment...