|Reviews for Garden of Dreams|
| nofaceme chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Wow. This is such a beautiful poem! I loved it. Gorgeous setting. Keep it up!
| Needa S chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Beautiful. I enjoyed it muchly. Thanks for the review. Hey, would you like to come join my site and share your work with us? I'll send you an invite. Keep up the awesome work.
| EringoBraugh chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
wow, you're a good author. that poem is beautiful. I really like it. I want to see the garden of dreams, it seems so pretty. I wish they were not only dreams
| Astartes Rapture chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
This is breathtakingly beautiful. The natural rhymes flow oh so well. I now know which author to come to when I desire reprieve from a hectic day. Thank you for this small moment in peace.*~*Astarte
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
How mystical! Beautiful imagery, it sounds like such a heart-warming sanctuary. Using this as a metaphor is great and very good descriptions as well.
| Changethesubject chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
oh i am really glad i read this. i love the imagery you use, i was IN the garden when i read this. congratulations, its not many writers that can transport their readers. ~pinkazalea
| VelvetNightSky chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
This is amazing! I love the imagery and it seems so real, I can see it! Keep writing! You have a lot of talent. ~VNS~
| Free-Writer chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
This poem made me nice to have a place that is happy. Great imagery.
| KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
beautiful imagery. the last verse is GREAT! :)-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Spun with a fiery night, somewhere deep within my perception of the universe; surely I shall visit it in time.
| Colonel Augen chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Ah, how you did give a faint taint of lightness to the atmosphere, and light seemed to come from your words. I liked the two last stenzas best, because of the idea behind, but sure, they wouldn't have been as good without the rest..
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Beautiful as always. The imagery is great and I really love this piece. QueenVixta
| hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
For some reason the first two lines already gave a lasting impact, and upon the reading the whole poem it felt like it was truly 'drifting' as if 'carried upon the cool breeze'. There is this dreaminess which I particularly enjoyed. Keep it up.
| FictionPressPenName chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Wow, that was amazing. Very easy to picture. It showed such a beautiful scene, but it's sort of sad at the same time because it's not real. You should write more. You are one of the few people I actually look forward to reading new poems by.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
wow, i had to remind my self to breathe after that.
i could taste this poem