Reviews for Little Island
Lellida chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
This poem is awesome! The first lines about lying on broken glass really drew me in. I love the beautiful imagery here, and how you used words that tend to be bad (ie "stained, bleached") in a good conotation, kind of like they're good but in a dark way- if that makes sense. I really love the lines about skipping pebbles, and the ending is just so awesome and made me smile.
Changethesubject chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
yay i like the imagery in it. and i...just liked it!