|Reviews for Ordinary|
| rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Haha I love it. The slap was very abrupt and amusing. The reactions, priceless. Great story to a fun story! And those three definitely seem like they could be really good friends (Jophi, Ryan and Rachel)
| blanky chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
i like where its going but maybe you could go more in depth with the characters... yea but awesome
| Empyreal Melody chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Haha. Yay! Another story! And it's funny! Is Ryan under some sort of bet? That wink is kinda suspicious... unless it's me who's being suspicious. But cool fic!
| yarrowicefrost chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
this was pretty good:) write more soon, yeah?