Reviews for Ordinary
rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Haha I love it. The slap was very abrupt and amusing. The reactions, priceless. Great story to a fun story! And those three definitely seem like they could be really good friends (Jophi, Ryan and Rachel)
blanky chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
i like where its going but maybe you could go more in depth with the characters... yea but awesome
Empyreal Melody chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Haha. Yay! Another story! And it's funny! Is Ryan under some sort of bet? That wink is kinda suspicious... unless it's me who's being suspicious. But cool fic!
yarrowicefrost chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
this was pretty good:) write more soon, yeah?