|Reviews for When It Falls|
| Anumati chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Good to see you're not dead and still at it, my friend.
It's very true that the news of a death and the physical proof of death are intensely different experiences.
| shootingstar247 chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Hm I really liked that. Very well done.
| RaiKamishiro chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
You can feel it in the folds of the elevarot doors, going to the reception room, even if you don't feel it seeing the cremated bones.
| alittlebitabsurd chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
This is really cool. Very real.
There are five thousande two hundred eighty feet in a mile, by the way, but I personally think you should change the second fact to make it wrong too. Because when I first read "two thousand five hundred eighty," I didn't notice it was wrong, and that goes so well with the theme here.
| Prevaricate chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Wonderful description. The narrator is very open, emotionally, allowing the reader to feel more a part of the story... very, very nice.