i reallt like it! i cant wait till see what happens next!

hmm. i dont know everything seems a bit weird and unexplained. do you read your entries before you post them? Just writing.

hmm. alright story so far. Im not too sure I like Kat she seems to judge people to quick. I mean Nat seems nice and Dayton seems...ok. And why does she have a PSP when her family is poor? Nelly is a decent character, a bit cliched but she seems to be well done.

Okay...for the last time. Some people call it Hormone Hill, while others refer to it as Laguna Beach Hill. And how unfair is it that you can just take our hill's name? That is so cheap. Even if this is based on an experience of mine, with a much twisted plot by the way, you still could have attempted to rename the hill...though I have no clue as to what it could to see Dayton, how rude is that? Omg...the Golden Boy is gonna be Nat. No. Oh well, Nat's kinda geeky and is like...wait. If Nat is her Golden Boy, then it really IS like my life. *faints*Oh. Caught by the parents. Again...rather cliche. Oh well. I'm over it. ...maybe Nelly is trying to get Dayton away from Kat so Abby-Lou can have him...could that maybe be it? Guess I'll have to wait to find out.

Another great chapter, keep writing, you rock, yea...you know the drill.

Luvs and Hugs, your inspiration for the story, aka ~Nicole~

BOO! How incredibly fifth grade is that? Seriously. Now,if you really wanted to make it modern, you should have had Nat squeeze or poke her sides...that's the thing that's in...so yea. Wo-ow! Nat saves the falling girl. Remember my story of Shane; the shoe falling off, him getting it, us talking? Well...this is even more cliche than the shoe thing was. Falling girl saved by a guy that likes her. How unexpected. ending...that was so awesome.

This truly was your best chapter yet...it was awesome. So ignore my sarcasm and stuff...all a smokescreen. It's really great, you are an awesome writer. Keep it up and keep posting!

Luvs and Hugs, your inspiration for the story, aka ~Nicole~

Aw. AW! Do i forsee Kat gaining feelings for hiM?

Tofu cheerios? Or were they not cheerios? I'm lost...that part was rather confusing. ..nice way to word the slave/bf thing. Very classy...really it is. But isn't it just so true? Bfs are ur slaves? Oh, they're not? Okay ! You just refuse to tell us his answer? Well, I think he said now. Just remember I write as I read this, so I might be fixing up my yelling at you or w/e later ...he didn't give an answer. Still...mean of you not to just say that from the ! Kat's going out w/ Abby-Lou's heartthrob? Oh...so not a good choice. Lol.

All in all a good chapter...loved it, as per usual. You kick butt at writing1 Lol. Ok..now I'm gonna be incredibly selfish and advertise my story. Lol...I hope ur okay w/ it, cuz you DID say it was good. Anyway, just search for stories under my penname...it's apparantly a good story.

Kk...I'm done. Good chapter, post more soon!

Luvs and Hugs, the inspiration for ur story, aka ~Nicole~

yay! best chapter yet! haha

This truly is a short chapter...so it's kinda ironic that it took me like a week to read this one and only a day (less than, in fact) to read the other, much longer ones. So...yea.

Haha...make Nat live near Kat. Very fun. Oh...Nat, Kat. Aw, their names go so good together and they rhyme! Think of what awsomely awesome love poems they could write too each other. So sweet. *tear* Only...he's mean to her. So it wouldn't work too well. Also, my heart is still set on Dayton getting the girl. So, yea.

Omg...you made her like StarWars? How awfully awful. Oh, well. I'm over it.

Kk...good story, great author, yadda yadda. You name a compliment, you got it. Kk...Bye!

Luvs and Hugs, your inspiration for the story...aka, ~Nicole~

Lindsey...erm...i mean...Vira! It ROCKS! YAY! Now I suppose you can stop sending me chapters. I can just check up on it on here. Way to go, though. It rocks. I'm gonna post my hot australian guy story on here for kicks. *kick kick kick*

"maddie" (a.k.a...wel...you can guess, im sure.)

Oh, thank you all for your reviews! Thank you too, Nicole, for being so loyal. lol I will post the fourth chapter latter today, I'm just getting home so...

I like this story. It had me hating Nelly at the exact point in which you introduced her. Very good.

*~Miss Helena Black~*

Hey nice story I can't wait to see of there will be any more chapters comming.

I would just like to say how rude it is that my reviews apparantly mean nothing to you. I mean...so what if I review more than your non-friends-cuz-they-don't-really-know-you-so-therefore-can't-actually-be-that-good-of-friends-with-you people. You get interesting, fun reviews from me and should be proud of that. Hmph!

Prediction: Nat and Dayton are possibilities for her Golden Boy...I say Dayton totally wins. Cuter, knows her...yea yea. Nat is a drama geek...nothing wrong with that...it's just, I'd pick Dayton. So...do whatever. But in my heart, Dayton is the true winner. Well, actally, Alex is, but this is story-talk, not real life, so I guess I'll have to say Dayton. Lol. Then again..sucky drawer is Dayton...ah, who cares.

I like the joke with the heart surgery/snack bar. Very cool. As you can prolly tell, I'm reviewing this as I read, to give you a very thourough review. Go me! Lol.

Strapped you to a tree and pulled out a belt...wow! How wrong can you interpret that? I'm thinking of spuffiness...just never use that phrase again please. Ugh! My stupid gutter mind. It's not so bad anymore though. I actually managed to write "pump for information" in my journal and not get it for 10 mins into the the writing. Progress! Lol.

Luvs and Hugs, your inspiration for the story, aka... ~Nicole~

PS. As you can prolly tell, I love being your inspiration.

PPS. Update so I can R&R right away. I told you...I hate waiting for updates on stories!

Hey...one thing in common w/ Kat and I...drama! Lol. Thank god for that. Nat sounds rude, yet fragile. It's really weird. He's all snotty and stuff...but he seemed really hurt after Kat's snide remark. Anyway...you should really update. I know for a fact that you are way farther in the story...so add to it already. And you need more readers so I can read interesting reviews. Hear that reviewers? Make it interesting! Lol. WTG girly! (girly being quoted from Erin, of course) I'll ttyl. Luvs and Hugs,the inspiration for your story aka...~Nicole~