|Reviews for So Lonely|
| Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
"Just close your eyes think and you will see," I would add a comma between "eyes" and "think"
"If you would just give me chance you’d see," You need an "a" between "me" and "chance"
I love this poem a lot, wonderful job!
| Spooks chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
The rhymes allow it to be read fluently and the rhythm fits perfectly...
It evokes emotion in the reader... Don't ever stop writing.
| Letenastare chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Wonderful ! The rhyms are so good, the rythm engaging ; so much sadness and pain but so pretty poem. Congratulation.