Reviews for A Star
Unknowable chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
"the star is taken for granted" thats wonderful! I love this line.
Macayla Jo Adams chapter 1 . 2/12/2001
I really like it...especially the "But eventually everyone's star will begin to burn their fingers and they have to let it go". Great imagery.
Allana chapter 1 . 2/10/2001
VERY deep. (sorry for the short reviews, but I'm trying to get through all 20 of these). Reminds me of "The more you tighten your grip, Tarkin, the more star-systems will slip through your fingers". The poem's kinda sad, though. Very good!
elegance chapter 1 . 2/10/2001
Another wonderful one! You rock at Poetry!
Battykat chapter 1 . 2/10/2001
Nice symbolism, is the star supposed to be the soul or life? or both? Whichever, another powerful piece. Thank you :)
Celestial Phoenix chapter 1 . 2/10/2001
This is very nice. I like the message at the end.