|Reviews for Underage Sibling Rivalry|
| Jen calculates chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Dammit. You make me really ashamed. I envy how you don't fluff your poems with useless imagery. Good job on this.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
just too many things to describe. envy, beauty, love are played so naturally and spite seems so evident in this (but I process poetry in this weird it-tells-a-story type of way). lovely, lovely.
| Procrastinating Fairy chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Oh, dear...that's a very powerful piece, rather...well, confusing, intense...all that good stuff.
It's sad, and I like it...great work, great work.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
... wow. this is really intense, very powerful. great work.