Reviews for collision
starry night blue chapter 1 . 9/21/2008

You did a good job with this one. I'm a Muslim and that story is important to us, especially Shiite Muslims...history's repeating itself.
abc chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Sarah Allie chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
I absolutely loved this poem, I'm a Shiite Muslim, and in my country, we commemorate the story of Karbala every year. Great job, and keep it up :D!

Sarah :) x
justice4all chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
I am a muslim. The story of Karbala is a very tragic story. You did a good job with the poem. It explains the tragedy well.
Josh chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
I know a little about Muslim history. I don't know much, though. You put it in a good perspective.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
i don't know a lot about muslim history ('part from bits of the crusades) so i was really interested in this poem, it's taught me something :D

and it's well executed, nice work, well done!