Reviews for Smile
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
that last line is so powerful and awesome.. i like the way you incorporated dialouge.. very cool
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
wow vert good i especially loved the last line
Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
*hugs* sorry you needed that lol

very beautiful and well done. I like the emotional conveyance here, and i'd urge you to continue writing.