|Reviews for Chocolate and Cigarettes|
| riding shotgun in the sky chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Gorgeous, gorgeous-vibrant (in a very dark, bohemian-shabby kind of way), great flow, original thoughts and/or wording, and I love the sort of stream-of-consciousness feel it exudes... ah, loveliness. The last line, particularly, caught my imagination (and set it on fire, at that).
btw, I'd love ya to check out some of my poetry-it's under my alternate penname, The Girl in the Cafe. I think you'll rather like Snow Beetle Butterfly Kisses. ;) ...Speaking of, where have all your poems gone?