| Reviews for Sentenced |
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   merrymowmow chapter 12 . 8/3/2007 I was wondering when you're going to update? |
| DJ chapter 12 . 4/17/2007 Alex: Wow...hell is a real jerk... DJ: yeah...PPMS. Alex: PPMS? DJ: Perminant PMS. sorry i have not updated and such. ill be losing internet soon so my stories are now dead...unless you would like to finish them? |
| merrymowmow chapter 11 . 3/4/2007 I was wondering when you're going to update. |
| DJ chapter 11 . 12/26/2006 O...BS has a crush huh? but really, is now the time for that i mean in the path of death, trying to train two witches, and youre falling in love with one? and what are you cursed with? Alex: erectile disfunction. *snickers* that was mean... Eric: Bad breath... BS: STOP IT! DJ: bad initials. BS: BITCHES! *pck pck pck pck* |
| Pixie-Twix chapter 10 . 5/17/2006 Angel: *to B* look,i get pissed and people find their internal orgins rearranged, not only that but i am finding a whole new kinship with Dru so LEAVE HER ALONE! Dru: kinship? with me? Angel: yeah, both of us have nearly been frozen to death by our phycho authors. loved it girl! cant wait to read more. |
| DJ chapter 9 . 1/17/2006 *pouts* well FINE! i talked to yuo too so no more reviews! *insert rasberry* okay...just kidding... |
| DJ chapter 8 . 1/3/2006 sorry i havent updated, but i have had A, a seriouse case of writters block, and B - i work at a retail store. it is around the holidays. you do the math. so...loved the sotry and cant wait to see what happens next. |
| Maeve Summers chapter 8 . 1/2/2006 Hiya! Another really awesome chapter. But I noticed that the first sentence was a major run-on sentence. Maybe if you put in a comma or something, then that would not make the sentence a run-on. It's just hard to fully understand a run-on sentence until after you have read it. :) Hope my tips helped. And again, an amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Hurry! :) - Amy |
| Maeve Summers chapter 7 . 1/2/2006 Hiya again, Just another quick tip: If you put " 's", it is either showing possession or the "s" is just a shortened way to say "is". For example, "its" shows possession. "It's" is literally saying "it is". :) Another awesome chapter! :) - Amy |
| Maeve Summers chapter 6 . 1/2/2006 Hiya, Tip #3) Your tenses confuse me a little. Stick to one tense. Sometimes you use past and other times you use present. But a lot of writers have that problem. Ahem, I do! But I try to correct it when I can. :) Awesome chapter! - Amy |
| Maeve Summers chapter 5 . 1/2/2006 Hiya, Tip #2) If you want to use "a" before a word such as: a lamp. You would use "a" not "an". Because lamp begins with a consonant. If you wanted to say: an elephant. You would then use "an" because elephant begins with a vowel. But those are just picky things. It just would improve your writing. :) - Amy |
| Maeve Summers chapter 4 . 1/2/2006 Hiya,Again, fantastic chapter! There are only couple of things that bugged me through the story. 1) Put 'their' instead of 'there'. You are trying to show possession. :) Next tip in chapter 5 review... - Amy |
| Maeve Summers chapter 3 . 1/2/2006 Hiya! I just read from Chapter 3 to Chapter 8. An amazing story, so far! I just figured I would go back and review every chapter. :) Because you deserve reviews. I haven't checked out this story in a while... because I haven't gone on to this site in forever... Keep writing! :) - Amy |
| Dragons Jinx chapter 7 . 12/20/2005 ahem. youre sorry? oh...right...im supposed to forgive you here arent i? WELL FORGET IT! update! and i mean NOW! on other topics, i am revamping my last chappie, cause i dont like it...cause everyone is too out of charicter. so, wanted to elt you know. |
| evil-kenshin chapter 6 . 12/17/2005 great story, continue the story |