Reviews for The Suicide Jumper
my princess ending chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Raichu Speed chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Great start ya got here; I enjoyed the first chapter a lot. I hope you continue, such a good story shouldn't go to waste.
DarkKnightingale chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
This is a great story. I like the humor that you added into the story as well as in the summary. Please continue writting! I like your style. :)

FreeDaChicken chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
This looks really good, you've got a good start here. I have a couple problems though, and they are: shouldn't Jake be a little more startled/scared/paranoid after Sylvia fell on him, and shouldn't he be in more pain? I mean, it's not every day a girl jumps off a building and lands on you! Your grammar's only got a couple problems, you might want to consider getting a beta reader or proof reading it before you post luck and update soon!
Lil Bazza chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Totally awesome story. Completely one hundred percent awesome. It is so cool.

Great, now I sound like a bimbo.

Well the story is really great, and the first chapter (whilst being somewhat serious) was hillarious (was it meant to be?) and whilst we only saw a glimpse of the main characters, thy are really original and creative. I can't wait for the next chapter to see where this story goes.

Keep up the good work!
The-Account chapter 1 . 11/28/2005

It's hilarious!

An dI love your main character GIRL! She's awesome!

And I love Jake! He's awesome too!

Please keep writing!