Reviews for Paper Wasps
McKenzie Drestire chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Beautiful
Haberdasher chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
this was satisfying to read. something about the last verse was so heartfelt and touching. very emotional. just that "god! i cant escape the gravity of you" it stands alone.. brilliant. - the Lady Elaine
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
wow! that's poignant! can't pick a favorite line, i'd be quoting most of the poem. the angst, frustration and confusion drip between the lines. it's definately a thinker...