Reviews for The End
Morcirith chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
giggle out loud. love poem: passes inspection. very interesting...
Lady Wolf Paw chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
a big ass rock I like that line thats about it the only thing that really stuck with me for that poem that line just every time i read it thats all i got out of the poetry Wolf Paw
Ryenon chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
That big ass rock would be so freaking hard to lift the way your putting it. I mean I'd go rent a crane if I had the money.

"How could I have ever been so blind

to truly believe you loved me"

I hear that more times in a day than I care to count.(Peer counciler)
drummerbonbon chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
i am rejoicing in the insanity! awesome once again! thanx so much you rock! your reviews are awesome and yes i have buried myself.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
oh, heartwrenching...
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
hm...sad and touching. cant really say i've been through the same thing but this is good. beautiful ending, keep writing,

mez
t3h Butterzfly of Nothing chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Gorgeously brutal. I love it.
Ajna chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Very nicely done. To the point. Good work.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Okay, first I have to say that I love Charlie Brown. The emotions I felt hen reading this were so raw, powerful, real. Just the last few lines brought a tear to my eye. Lovely poem as always.

EB
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
very good. i fall for the same guy over and over so i can relate. it sucks. great job
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
excellent way to mesh seemingly unlike things together to create an interesting work. flows well in the transitions.