Reviews for Effigy of Eden
Dawn's-End chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
I love the poem and the rhythm and a few of the lines really stick out and have great emphasis."dwindle in the darkness as forever passes by""cursed to wander ever lost for fear of being found""hiding in a hollow heart, behind a pretty face"so maybe I'm a sucker for alliteration... who knows. Very very good work. It brings up a lot of thought.