Reviews for Untitled
TinuvielDork chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Aw, this is sweet! And not too mushy-gushy. Just enough to be perfect. Yeah, I see how my poem reminded you of this, especially the middle part. I like this. It's very cute.

Thanks for reviewing! (And no, I don't mind the anonymousness.) It made me very happy. :)

Even though I don't always review, I do read you poems when you post them. So keep writing! I like your stuff.

Much love...TinuvielDork
Lord Sinclair chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
it is said that poetry comes from the soul. It must be nice to have this in your soul.

- Chancellor Sinclair
Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
A testiment to the power and beauty of your writing- I normally hate love poems of any sort. I love this one. It conveys the emotion without making it too syrupy sweet. You don't make it cheapen it by adding useless metaphors and such. It's simple and elegant and I love it. Yay! Thank you.

Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig
emsworth chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Once again, I should shut up, and let the other reviews speak for themselves. all i can say is that this is magnificent and that i still don't like the line about happy walking couples. keshavaPS: you're right, it was "i love you"..well, i love you!
The Sage of Story chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
AW...seriously, I "aww"ed out loud.

That was really beautiful.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
i like the ending to this, it was unexpected. great work, really sweet poem.