|Reviews for More Than Power|
| Skoonie chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Cool story, but there are three major things I saw about it: your paragraphs are too choppy and close together, making it hard to read; There are a few grammatical/punctuation errors scattered throughout the story (don't worry; there aren't that many), and, most importantly of all, you neglected to tell us more about these heros! They seem like a cool bunch (even if they are a bit like cookie-cutter characters-that is, character personalities that have been used so many times, it seems like a national passtime). Other than that, it's a great story. Update soon!
| dbz 77 chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
I loive super hero stories; I wrote a few myself. What city does this take place?
| Anya Tempest chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
I really enjoyed this. I totally love superhero stories, and I really liked the way you handled this.
There were perhaps a few grammatical mistakes, but nothing major, and certainly nothing to worry about.
Well done, give yourself a pat on the back D
(I'm so totally adding this story to my favourites list...)