A very interesting poem you have written here indeed. This is perhaps the most original poem that I have read about death in my life. I thank you for reading my poem "I watch...". I was quite angry when I wrote that piece; pretty much, some classmate discouraged me from acting ever again, which was one of my other hidden passions. Alas, I am dead. She killed that part of me. She will pay... thank you for showing respect.

Xara O'Connor

Dark, synical and delightful. Thank you for the reviews and i like the poem.

~L'Ange Du Mary Sanglant~

Brilliant, dear. The words you have chosen are beautiful. And you have insightful and reflective ideas about death.

~Doray

Pretty deep...I like how you express 'what' death is! GREAT JOB!