Reviews for Naive
Penelope June chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
doesn't love always make you feel like that... I like the last part"And I refuse to fix it again."

sounds a lot like me and polotics...
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
very sad yet honest and repentant. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
Voice of a Pen chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
Im Back! i like this poem. i like all of your work that i have read. but it feels good for me to be back. Good job though Felicia
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Bravo, Bravo... You get a standing ovation.. This was a great poem and I believe my favorite part was the last two lines, My heart is crushed beyond repair And I refuse to fix it again... Just sums up the pain you feel after someone you love breaks your heart then leaves...
Kenishiro chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Love it! I like how emphasize some of the words and sentences that stresses your feeling... yeah i think it's a creative way to do it, it's better when you read it out loud, by stress out the words your saying it makes the poem a lot more life and feel to it! Great job, keep up the good work!