|Reviews for My Undetected Canoodling|
| Taiyl chapter 20 . 9h
Thank you for finishing this story. I just decided to look at this story from my bookmark and saw that you updated. Thank you so much.
| bridgettblah chapter 20 . 10/2
So anyways, this is my new fav and I am literally so happy right now. Oh my god. I have a stupid cheesy grin and oh my godddd theyre so cute and wonderful and this is the besst story I have ever read just saying. Seriously. I dont even know what else to say! this is just so good! and I want more! Altho, as much as I love reading things about happy couples, Im ALL about the pre relationship angst. Which this had a lot of and Im so happy about it. These two had my stomach in knots. But there were also butterflies. Butterfly knots? I dunno. Alright JESUS I JUST LOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MY GOD.
| gyoung chapter 1 . 8/16
Now, that's a creative and cool way to set up a story! Way to go! :) I'm already feeling quite curious.
| two closed doors chapter 20 . 7/15
I cannot believe it. I'm honestly so stunned I don't know what to say. I last checked on this story 4 years ago to see if it had been added to. I have since finished medical school and my first year of my residency and happened to go onto fictionpress and find this story and to my utter delight, it was updated. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. The showdown was a fitting end and the epilogue style and discussion makes sense. Your writing style is clear and in this story, light and on point with what the characters are going through. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/2
Amazing. Thank you
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/2
YAY so sweet.
Also, feel free to post any loveydovey extras. :)
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/2
I am an idiot. I just realized as I started reading this chapter that this story, my FAVORITE story, is complete. COMPLETE! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you... :)
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/1
UPDATES! SO HAPPY! THIS IS MY FAV FIC ON HERE! :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/1
THANK GOD! I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! YAYAYAYAYAYAY! :)
| ChuGaEun chapter 20 . 5/28
I'm in tears :'(
Roth is what you can say, imperfectly perfect.
I really enjoyed reading this though, I've only started reading this last night, what more of your readers who were with you since the beginning?
In between struggling through your work and everyday life, I hope you find the time to continue writing good stories like this one.
| ChuGaEun chapter 19 . 5/28
OMG. Colleen Hoover!
WAY TO GO TAMIKA JANELLE! I WOULD NEVER, NOT IN A MILLIONS YEARS, HAVE THE GUTS TO TELL SOMEONE I LOVE (IF I HAD ONE), HOW MUCH I FEEL ABOUT HIM.
You deserve a pat on the back. KUDOS :D
| ChuGaEun chapter 2 . 5/28
she's gonna end up with roth, wouldnt she?
| ajachowder1 chapter 20 . 5/11
I couldn't stop reading your story no matter how hard I tried. That is the reason why it's currently 12:19 am and I'm still up. It's a school night and I have to get up at 5.
I'm in a desperate need for sleep right now so I'll make this short and sweet.
Beautiful, amazing, captivating, a truly awe inspiring and humerus piece. Lovely.
| Melly chapter 20 . 5/1
How many times have I read these last two chapters? I have lost count. I miss Jane and Roth so much; I am picturing them being married and having babies. I came across this story roughly five years ago and like Thatcher and Nadine, Jane and Roth are apart of my life. I think somewhere they exist for real. I will hold on to that belief
| allancaldera chapter 20 . 3/30
It was a really love story. Love the both together and happy that Roth has its happy ending with jane. I usually read slash but this was good.