Reviews for My Undetected Canoodling
Desparate4URupdate chapter 17 . 4/12/2009
Hi.I love your story. Can you please please pleaseplease please update son?
sourgummyworms2007 chapter 17 . 3/22/2009
wow, i feel in love w/ ur story. and i'm kinda sad to see that its been a long while since u updated. but its a very good story and i enjoy reading it. it doesn't follow the typical cliche moment. and i love ur summary b/c it really does get the reader to think that she's actually goin for the brother at first and that the older brother is just an evil person. neway, good story.
Unrememorable chapter 17 . 3/18/2009
I love this story :)

Thanks for sharing your gift with us - It's the perfect way to procrastinate from doing homework!

In all seriousness though, I really, really enjoy this story to no end!
Kellet chapter 16 . 3/17/2009
I was going to curse all the powers that be (otherwise known as Fate, Destiny or God - I apologize if I offend you, it wasn't my intention) but then it occurred to me that it was all YOUR doing! WHY WOULD YOU TORTURE ME LIKE THAT? THIS IS PURE AGONY! HOW COULD YOU KEEP THEM APART? HAVE YOU NO KINDNESS? NO MORALS? Sigh. Suffice to say, I feel like screaming "NO!" at the top of my lungs. This is what you made me do! You reduced me to a pile of goo, wishing and waiting for them to finally get together and put an end to this once and for all. This is what you get when you write so well that you make your readers wish that you stop torturing them, that's right. You get readers blaming you!

On a side note, there were a few times you wrote "I'm am" instead of "I am" so watch out for that. And with that, I'll end with a warning: if they don't get together by the end of this story, so help me God, -

Get the picture? Seriously, awe-inspiring work.
intellectual titmouse chapter 17 . 3/8/2009
wow. this story is awesome. perfect characters. i'm a little - no, very disappointed that more isn't happening with them. good stuff though. trust, this review is a very muted reaction. LoL my heart was racing everytime something looked like it may happen between them.
bandgeek1688 chapter 17 . 3/4/2009
I LOVE this story! well, I love almost all of your stories, but I really really like this one. :) and I read it when I should be reading for my class too. I love their relationship together, and that cliffie was just great, but I NEED to see what happens next. PLEASEE update! I will love you forever
TaMaWe chapter 17 . 2/6/2009
oh come on you just can't STOP

why, why are you stopping NOW

i was listening to everything changes from staind while reading the chapter

and the only thing that i want more than anything else is another chapter so please, please PLEASE!

don't make me hunt you down
nonaccount chapter 11 . 2/1/2009
Finally! I've been looking for a chapter that I haven't reviewed yet, to make my plea to you:

PLEASE, PLEASE don't tell me, and your other loyal readers out there, that you've given up on one the BEST stories on fp. PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE WITH WHIP CREAM, CHOCOLATE DRIZZLE WHATEVER KIND OF NUTS YOU PREFER AND A CHOCOLATE COVERED CHERRY ON TOP PLEASE UPDATE!
darkgurl92 chapter 17 . 1/24/2009
OMG...they kissed..update soon..

please..want to know what happens...
ebo15 chapter 17 . 1/21/2009
Please update soon! its been over a year! PLEASE! IM BEGGING U! :)
you have a fan club chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
we miss you! come back to us!
styling16 chapter 17 . 1/13/2009
wait uhm... that's it? i mean that's the ending? oh c'mon!

i like your story but the ending isn't really what i was expecting it to be.

i want to know what would happen to them... how they would treat each other... have a long distance relationship... yadda... yadda... yadda...

well since it was already written and i can't do anything about it, since it's your story not mine. you can end it any way you want it to.

it was a nice story.

now i think i'm starting to fall for nerds like roth. hahahhahahah
raya chapter 17 . 1/9/2009
please please update soon

I keep checking to see if you updated everyday.

please update

I am getting tired of waiting.
Rin Hinderson chapter 17 . 1/7/2009
Please update...please...?
Demeterr chapter 17 . 1/5/2009
O wow, this story is awesome.
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