| Reviews for My Undetected Canoodling |
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   Plinky chapter 13 . 8/13/2006 You're back! (I've only just got back from holiday. You put a smile on my face) He sleeps with his glasses on? Aww, I'd forgotten how much I missed this! You write conversation very well. I miss Roth and Tameka Janelle! They are so perfect for each other. Please update soon! :D |
| CiaoBellaxx chapter 13 . 8/10/2006 omfg so not fair you cannot do that to a person update soon or ill set the much-feared wigglies on you lol |
| Fuji Syusuke chapter 13 . 8/9/2006 Ooh. The wait was worth it. Great chapter. Roth, as always, is awesome. Also, I like the fact that his haircut was prompted from a chemistry incident. That's wonderful, and I think it keeps to him being true to himself. All of his changes weren't for attention and that makes him even better. Nice chapter, can't wait for the update! |
| fox of the night chapter 13 . 8/8/2006 wow one word... awesome. Roth is really good at avioding the question. i love it so far, but i hate cliffhangers so gr. anywho update soon please :D |
| NehemiaH chapter 13 . 8/7/2006 AGH! I hate you, but I love you. Great chapter. And an even better cliffhanger. Update soon! |
| violet-eyez chapter 13 . 8/6/2006 oh she kissed him? |
| estrellabella chapter 13 . 8/6/2006 Wow, great story, I'm so addicted! Please update soon, I can't wait to hear what happens... Roth is such an awesome character! If I could offer one bit of constructive criticism, it would be that it seems like, especially in the beginning, all Roth and Jane ever talked about was her crush on his brother. They would get together, talk about his brother and her crush for awhile, and then he'd leave... I think if I were Roth, and I felt the way he does about Jane, I'd get kind of sick of talking about it... but anyway, it's gotten better towards the more recent chapters. Anyway, long review... great job! PLEASE update soon, I can't wait! |
| lamp chapter 13 . 8/5/2006 aw ur gonna kiss himand i bet he is gonna react and kiss ya back!update soon |
| catharsis7 chapter 13 . 8/4/2006 ah! wow. she's a lot braver than i will ever be. i love how roth keeps avoiding questions too. anyway, good chapter, i'm so glad you updated! |
| bluz chapter 13 . 8/4/2006 no, you can't stop it there, what happened.? |
| Disenchanted Tragedy chapter 13 . 8/4/2006 Dear Lord, beautious new chapter. Lovely, deary, absolutely lovely. The long wait was worth it for this chapter; it definitely was. I hope that everything will work out but I also hope you can get out a new chapter as soon as you possibly can. I love this story; it's wonderful. Keep up the excellent writing. |
| Lady in Disguise chapter 13 . 8/3/2006 O she kisses him right? I can't wait for an update! |
| Lucifer's Girl chapter 13 . 8/3/2006 OMG! I loved it so much! You are the best romance author EVER! I absolutely adore your stories! You kick butt! I so cannot wait for the next chapter! You are awesome! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! Keep it up! |
| quietfool chapter 13 . 8/3/2006 Thank you for the update! Oh my gosh, I can't wait until the next one! More Roth & Janie, please... |
| holla chapter 13 . 8/3/2006 great chapter...i bet roth will wake up lol anywho keep up the great work and update soon |