Reviews for My Undetected Canoodling
CiaoBellaxx chapter 9 . 2/25/2006
Oh I lovw it! This is an amazing story! Update soon please!
Michelle chapter 9 . 2/20/2006
UPDATE! PLEASE! I love this story, it has a great pace and just the right amount of humor to make it an incredibly enjoyable read. Please update soon.
Eveiveneg chapter 9 . 2/19/2006
Ye need not worry about it. I've asked my friends much weirder questions than the difference between genital warts and herpes. In fact, I think I've asked strangers questions rather like that. Wonder what they think of me? Hm.

Anywho, I like that Jane is finally realizing Robbie's a bit of an ass - excuse my rudeness towards animals.

But I have to admit, it seems like you're making him into too much of a bad guy. Yes, people have less likable sides, but they have good ones too. It was terrible of him to have said things like that to Jane, but what person hasn't been at least the tiniest bit malicious in their lives? Even if it's towards someone who doesn't deserve it in the least?

I dunno, it feels wrong to just make him pure evil. Jane was his best friend for a long time; her recent revelations about his character might change her view of him, but I honestly don't believe that should just turn him into some sort of thing that doesn't have feelings. She should be able to somewhat understand him.

People go through the same sort of things that he has all the time, and as idiotic as it was of him to do them, it's natural for him to have trouble dealing with his problems.

I'm not expecting a huge reunion where all is forgiven. After all, there are always hurt feelings, even after things have been talked through. It's unrealistic to hope otherwise. I'm just asking that you lay off of him a bit. Maybe let him find a way to both deal with his crap and lessen his moronic tendencies.

Whew. Glad to get that out. It's been nagging me for a while. If this comes off as a flame, sorry. I've been known to be a tad sensitive to misrepresented personalities. Heh. My apologies. Well, aufwiedersehn. Or however it is you spell it. Please update soon.

-Eveiveneg
blargh chapter 9 . 2/16/2006
Please update soon!
Humor Me Pink chapter 9 . 2/14/2006
Ooh. Please update.

I heart Roth. )
sketchingaCYNiC chapter 9 . 2/12/2006
robbie has herpes? o.O what are trojans? i know i heard that term in health class, but ... i guess it would be kind of useful to know. _;;

anyway, um... yeah. i had a question, but then i forgot. oh well. i think it was about roth. . .

you ARE going to update soon, right? :D
sketchingaCYNiC chapter 8 . 2/12/2006
aww.. i really loved this chapter. janey writes freakish amounts in her journal, but i still loved it. _
sketchingaCYNiC chapter 6 . 2/12/2006
"Chapter One: Maybe, Just Maybe..."

you made a boo-boo D

i like the summary. it leads a reader on and doesn't make the story (as) predictable. :D
sketchingaCYNiC chapter 5 . 2/12/2006
... i don't understand how and why janey and robbie are BEST friends. they're so different. and don't seem to talk easily. i mean, and she's kind of shallow now that roth is hot. / it's just weird.
sketchingaCYNiC chapter 3 . 2/12/2006
squee! i love this story. T_T that psychology stuff is amazing. O_O roth is so insightful. it's weird though, because i keep picturing him as this one guy near my locker whose last name is roth. and then roth reminds me of broth. . weird. okay. i still gots 6 more chapters to go. squee! keep up the awesome writing. and i don't hate jane, oh em gee?
aerogirl401 chapter 9 . 2/11/2006
Beautiful story you have here. It's very well written. I love how you portray Jane. She seems so real, like someone I could know. I was kinda actually in her position, except there wasn't a hot older brother...well I hopw you update soon!
KaL05 chapter 9 . 2/9/2006
this is actually the first fic that i want to finish reading here in fictionpress... good job! the story is sweet! Dplease update soon!
BangBangYourDead chapter 9 . 2/8/2006
mm, I love it.
TaurusGirl7 chapter 9 . 2/7/2006
update soon!
BangBangYourDead chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
m love it.
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