| Reviews for My Undetected Canoodling |
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  ladededa chapter 9 . 2/6/2006 o robbie so deserved getting punched! haha roth rules. i really like the chapter and i cant wait 4 more! |
 Heth chapter 9 . 2/6/2006 Great as always. I know what you mean about the whole procrastinators thing. We're lazy and they should comply. I mean, seriously, who the hell needs productivity? |
| justcallmebubba chapter 9 . 2/6/2006 "It only got worse when I asked her if genital warts and herpes were the same thing..." |
| Ms.Romantic chapter 9 . 2/6/2006 i cant wait till roth and jane are together..i think she should kiss him! that would be suuper ammazing...xoxgood luck with all the school work, i have soo much hw too! |
| everelusivekudo chapter 9 . 2/6/2006 LOVE this! Absolutely do! :D Jane's funny and down to earth. Roth, even though he comes off as hard and mean, I don't think he isn't. He's been through a lot, I guess. Robbie's an inconsiderate (sp?) ass! I don't like him. But I guess that was the point. :) Update soon. |
| Plinky chapter 9 . 2/6/2006 I had a real little spaz and fell off my chair when I got the alert. I made a funny little squeaky noise as well. *Sigh* I think I'm going to have to do it again - *Sigh* Roth's so lovely. And Robbie's an idiot. Argh. Written so lovelyly - (Hehe) - i can really see it. I'm a pacifist, but when Roth punched Robbie, I couldn't help but say "Ha!" out loud. (Yeah, I'm like that.) He's so lurvely... She's going to be spending a day with ROth! Yay! Can't wait for that chapter! Hehe. Yay! Update soon! |
| WarriorHeart chapter 9 . 2/6/2006 awesome chapter! i love that roth punched robbie on jane's bealf and that he carried her. he is absolutely adorable! |
| blaze chapter 9 . 2/5/2006 i really like how this story could have turned cliche but didn't. :) it's awesome. |
| babixbunny chapter 9 . 2/5/2006 defnitely in the right direction |
| messy chapter 9 . 2/5/2006 robbie's getting kinda annoying now.. he doesn't seem to be in the same light that jane first put him in. |
| messy chapter 8 . 2/5/2006 wow i like the hose part |
| Renzie chapter 9 . 2/5/2006 LOVED THIS. Roth is so awesome. Great job. PLEASE update soon 3 |
| Anepidekti chapter 9 . 2/5/2006 Great Chapter! She finally saw Robbie's true nature! Can't tell you how much I love Roth's character (He's actually one of my favorite characters of every story I've read so far). His intelligence and sarcasm is a deadly combination! I cannot wait to read more Lol for the A/N :-D |
| quietfool chapter 9 . 2/5/2006 Aww! Roth is so sweet. How many times can I say that? Haha... Lovely chapter, I can't wait to read the next. Update soon, please! |
| alyssa chapter 9 . 2/5/2006 aww it looks like she's finally falling for roth! yay.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! and your author's note made me laugh. haha |