Reviews for My Undetected Canoodling |
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Mary4angelus chapter 5 . 1/1/2006 Hello!I had to write an review to say that your story rocks. The context its different though it seems so writing, can't wait to read more. UPDATE SOONIPs: I love the parts where Jane legs wobble ( Is this the right word? Or even spelled right?) everytime she's with Roth. |
FamousOneLiners chapter 5 . 1/1/2006 this is absolutely amazing, and so are you! |
Plinky chapter 5 . 1/1/2006 Oh, great chapter! I love Roth. He came to pick her up ... *Sigh* Great chapter. I really love this story! You HAVE to update soon! Please please please! I need to read more... |
Pigment of Your Imagination chapter 5 . 1/1/2006 YES! it finally works! This stupid review box thingy didnt work b4...& gah..that was a long review gone down the drain. I was lookin around the updated section..& ur story caught my eye. I ended up reading a different one, but then i found yours again & gave it a try. :D Wow! its great! There's something about Roth that i like. :) i dunno wat..but get me a pic of him..& i think i'd be able 2 figure it out. ;) Angie |
rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 5 . 12/31/2005 I really like this story. It's definitely realistic. And Robbie definitely has to be my least favorite character. And what's with my use of definitely? Hehe, err I can't make a good review right now I guess...it was better in my head. Uhm, yeah so Janey, Jane, or Tameka or whatever really reminds me of myself. Just her general attitude. But yeah, more Roth and Jane! They're so funny. :D |
Shorty Baby chapter 4 . 12/29/2005 I really likeit! Hope t see more updates soner! |
Kursed4Life chapter 4 . 12/29/2005 Okay I think I have a new favorite story on FP! Your story is so realistic and cute and funny and sad, I just love it .~Can’t wait for the next one! . |
Renzie chapter 4 . 12/28/2005 Great job :] Really liked the phone conversation. Hehe. Keep updating! 3 |
kaikaicutie chapter 4 . 12/28/2005 she's in love with roth. great story. update soon. |
Plinky chapter 4 . 12/28/2005 Great chapter! I loved the phone call, made me laugh out loud (Not sure why...) "(I could try to force myself to fall down because of it. This was not a stupid plan, by the way...really.)" I know EXACTLY how this feels. So funny. I've never actually tried to do this though. (Not that I'm going to admit to.) "Ye gads." Hahahahaha. "You disease ridden jerk." Nice writing. I liked this bit ... don't know why. Just seemed to fit well. You wrote the realisation bit really well. Flowed perfectly, and really seemed to come naturally. Go you! Oh, roth in a towel. Help me, someone... Can't wait until your next update! |
Jessica Renee chapter 3 . 12/22/2005 Loved it. Update soon :) |
Plinky chapter 3 . 12/20/2005 Lovely chapter. I LOVE her legs collapsing! HIlarious. And Roth is such a great character! Yay! Fantastic tension. - Update soon! |
Em chapter 3 . 12/16/2005 Great.. update soon |
Renzie chapter 3 . 12/15/2005 Ohmigawd 3 I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Especially the ending when she compliments him. I like how you're able to switch my view around when it comes to Robbie. By making the subtle change in Jane, you're also changing how I feel about Robbie. Awesome! Roth is cool :] |
rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 2 . 12/13/2005 I hate to say it, because I'm really not saying your story's THAT predictable AT ALL, but I actually knew what was coming. That Roth was going to change physically and lose all that weight and became really good looking. I just knew that was going to happen. lol, I'm silly sometimes. I think I read too many of these type of stories XP. So addicting though. |