Poor mary! Hehehe! great story

ah, that was great. Innuendo at it's best.

THAT WAS FUCKING KICK ASS! omg, have you ever watched Gakuen Heaven? They start almost every episode with something suggestive like that...its awesome.

that was really interesting!

nearly feel of my chair!

lol! That was good

oh, god, that's hilarious! i ;aughed my butt off reading that. HAHA

Hahaha! Nice...love it!

I remember when you showed this to me...I pretty much just about died! XD

I have to mention the title of this, which I find perfectly fitting. I also like how your descriptions at the beginning, of Mary-Jo Sue and everything about her, depict prudeness and 'holiness'. Even the minivan is "pure white". And, of course, the dialogue between the two guys is great. There doesn't seem to be any awkwardness, which we sometimes find in fics where authors have tried too hard to hammer certain formulations or words into their characters' mouths. Nope, it flows well here.

Yep, overall, quite funny and nicely done.

Cheers!

This is really comical and amused me to no end. _ I liked it a lot. Ha, I was figuring some candy bar until the white salty part, then that threw me. Anyway, great job. _

This was soo funny _ The Subway thing makes sense now _~

Haha this is funny...it just proves how much of a dirty mine we all have...I really wish it was true though...what Mary-Jo Sue thought...that would be hot! Good Job!

HAhahahahahaha.

Randomness.