Reviews for Eat Fresh
THE Mad Scientist chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Poor mary! Hehehe! great story
gummybaby chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
ah, that was great. Innuendo at it's best.
untouched chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
THAT WAS FUCKING KICK ASS! omg, have you ever watched Gakuen Heaven? They start almost every episode with something suggestive like that...its awesome.
Vanilla Bean CEO chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
that was really interesting!

nearly feel of my chair!
magalina chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
lol! That was good
Crymson Tears chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
oh, god, that's hilarious! i ;aughed my butt off reading that. HAHA
Celia Moonfrye chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Hahaha! it!

I remember when you showed this to me...I pretty much just about died! XD
chibicherrychan chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
I have to mention the title of this, which I find perfectly fitting. I also like how your descriptions at the beginning, of Mary-Jo Sue and everything about her, depict prudeness and 'holiness'. Even the minivan is "pure white". And, of course, the dialogue between the two guys is great. There doesn't seem to be any awkwardness, which we sometimes find in fics where authors have tried too hard to hammer certain formulations or words into their characters' mouths. Nope, it flows well here.

Yep, overall, quite funny and nicely done.

atadobsessive5345 chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
This is really comical and amused me to no end. _ I liked it a lot. Ha, I was figuring some candy bar until the white salty part, then that threw me. Anyway, great job. _
Becks-007 chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
This was soo funny _ The Subway thing makes sense now _~
Sparks Of Steel chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Haha this is just proves how much of a dirty mine we all have...I really wish it was true though...what Mary-Jo Sue thought...that would be hot! Good Job!
Plinky chapter 1 . 12/1/2005