Reviews for Aruciana's Mage
FXRG chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Interesting. A few spelling mistakes here and there (sorry, can't help nitpicking), but very nice start. Keep up the good work.
Yami-Tenma chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
interesting... who the boy! ah...evil cliffie! lol anywho, there were only 2 things that sorta stuck out...At the top ‘There, now [you?] should be able to’

Towards the end... ‘see if he couldn’t fins’... *find?

well, that's it _ can't wait to read more!