|Reviews for bring me down|
| Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Short, but sharp and agonizing somehow.
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
This is kinda confusing but very powerful. nice work.
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Short but perfect. "Lik scrawled across your stomach" That line is very powerful. This poemm really speaks to me.