Reviews for bring me down
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Short, but sharp and agonizing somehow.
Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
This is kinda confusing but very powerful. nice work.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Short but perfect. "Lik scrawled across your stomach" That line is very powerful. This poemm really speaks to me.