Reviews for True Serenity
Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I love this poem so much... I can visualize every detail vividly, which means that you've succeeded as a poet. Cool... What has inspired you to write this poem?
Pharaoh-Serenity chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
That was a beautiful piece of work.
Eire Rain chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
This was really amazing. Wonderful, vivid description! Thank you so much for the review you left on Equinox. It meant so much to me that it affected you. My goal for the story was to make people see the gray area in abusive relationships, so that abused men and women would not have the stigma of being weak for not leaving. And I'm really glad you saw that. Thank you!

-Sarah
monkeygirl300016 chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
WOW. I like it.
Hell's first Icicle chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
beautiful wording... carries the emotions thruogh relli well, very powerful. the last line really brought it off, though. i loved it. the whole thing, but mostly th last line. .
Changethesubject chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
oh i love the title. 'true serenity' - good work. i like the imagery in the poem too, its very powerful and strong. i love the last line - it finishes it off beautifully.