Reviews for Only You Can Save Me
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Its so sad. Was this one your first love?
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
So sad...I love the images your words create very powerful! D Maranwe
The Postscript chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Great poem with real emotion. Nice work. Keep writing.
fuzbrat chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Definitely a heartfelt poem even that heart it seems broken good writing keep it up
Morwain chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
aww...so sad
KristyASoroka chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
this was a nice poem, but on the line , " Without my heart I am nothing my ashes,"

this line seems a little unclear to me. Did you mean, " Without my heart I am nothing but ashes,"

anyways, I enjoyed reading this poem. Nicely written, I believe everyone can relate to this at one point in time in their life.
Draven DarkCrow chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
I like this poem, it just...flows. Well written.

Draven.
Kenshinswife chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
This one's so sad! WA! But it's really beautifully written, nice job!
Changethesubject chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
lots of imagery, it's very powerful. i like it a lot.