|Reviews for Love Vs Evil|
| je suis une pomme du terre chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Loved the last two lines! XD Your poetry is amazing... I really do wonder what life would be like without this site... no one would know that there are so many people with talent like this! LoL Keep writing! Oh and
P.S. Wow! I thought I was the only one awake at this hour. . lol :P Thanks for your review, and honestly sometimes I don't like my own rhyming pieces... it sometimes feels a little forced, and you have to remember to not let the rhymes control the poem... but YOU have no problem with that! For you it feels completely natural! Keep up the good work!Midnight Star
| rayefire1990 chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
very bittersweet and beautiful, i love how you worte this and love the ajectives, beautiful work!
| White is a Sin chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Yet again another wonderful poem here. I can't help but ask why you are not a professional or something.
I really like the start and the ending the best...just those four lines/
And the line as you were covered up by bloody sand that is really...self explanitory.
Thanks for review _
| DathomiranSciFiAuthor chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Very powerful and well-written.
| Morwain chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
wow that was good it reminded me of Romeo and Juliet in a way but then again we are studying that right now so i guess that might be why
| KristyASoroka chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Beautiful, the one word that came to mind. This poem was tragic, but had beautiful imagery. I saw one typo though, one I commonly do.
" I though of you in total despair."
"though," should be thought. ) Keep writting.
| Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Lovely. You should try, though, to vary your rhyme scheme- aabbcc etc seems to be your favorite and is getting a bit... how shall I say? I dunno, old, unvarying. Not to sound mean, though. You have good talent. Oh, and "Better Plans" is not my poem, I posted it for "Jillian Rose" before she registered onto Fiction Press.
| Kaileekins chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
This is very good! Very deep and intelligently written!
| Bonfire Of The Sanities chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Fantastic imagery, especially "Your soul as light as a single feather,
Yet your heart as strong as dragon leather"
Very nicely done!
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Tragic and very sorrowful indeed. Your descriptions are just superbly overwhelming and I just love your rhymes. Smart.
| Kenshinswife chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
I remember when you first told me this, I LOVE THIS ONE! It's very metaphoric and tragic, I like the dragon leather part!