Reviews for The Rippling Quiet
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I can relate. I get alot of these feelings when I'm playing the piano, amazing grace is very impowering by the way. The part in italics is so completely honest as well. Lovely tribute.
ice flyer chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Great poem. I know how you feel, and I can tell you were inspired to write it. I loved your adjectives and images - "tiredy, kindly saxophone notes" and "russet-streaked apples" and "red crescendo" - wow. Good job!
Pink Plastic Fire chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
"An honest worn timbre, piano keys falling, immersed

Ancient primal heartbeat

Muffled rhythmi "

I absolutely love that line. This poem was beautiful.. lovely imagery.
Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
"Russet-streaked apples and the fading dusk/Earth, soil, the closed-eyed acceptance of"

Those were fabulous lines. A very good piece, I like the way you write. Good job.
Arichos chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
GOD FREAKING AWESOME! Wow, i really like your poems, you have an excellent gift, seriously, your great, don't stop your work.
truth is subjective chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
you've just taken my style of writing and turned it better
words music and love stay true chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
YAY! You're back! It's been so long! I love your poetry! Its so good. My favorite part is near the end in italics, it's great. This poem is just that, raw emotion. It's wonderful! I hope you continue to write poetry! I'll be waiting for the next update!The Scottish Dragon
Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
An honest worn timbre, piano keys falling, immersed-i feel so immersed in such sights and sounds of beauty.i am feeling this more than reading.

just so melodically natural.
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
hey, i guess i dont really appreciate music as much as you do but this is quite beautiful. makes you think...peace...sounds really wise and gentle. lovely,

Uriah Hamilton chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
It creates a mood and has some meaningful images, that is a musical quality.
Plinky chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
I. Loved. This.

I'd forgotten how utterly fabulous your poetry was.


I love music. To listen to and to play.

I love it all. It's fantastically written and a lovely theme.

Lovely style.


keep writing, and thanks for all your lovely reviews! -
al-Salil chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Good-i am very impressed...