Reviews for Underworlds
storm42 chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
You need to update, dang it! I've been waiting for new chapters for Who Could Ever Learn to Love a Beast and Cold to the Touch for EVER.

Are you going to be one of those people that leaves a great story and never finishes it? I hope not.

On a different note, I like this story so far. It gives some background for Beast, and I think it's going to be a great read.


Eccthlacine chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
I finally read it, and it is a fantastic story in it's own write. Beautifully written, much like your other work and it makes you feel for the characters. Lovely
R-and-R-er chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Aw, I love your stories. They're breathtakingly eloquent. When I read them, I can just picture all the events happening. Please update For Who Could Ever Learn to Love a Beast?, please. Finishing it and publishing it would be the best scenario but a new chapter would be wonderful and enough to make my week. Come on, please? How could you refuse such shameless begging? Huh? Update soon?
lalalala chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
wow, this is REALLY good so far... i admit that at first the summary didn't really attract me that much... but when i saw that it was somewhat related to your other story, For Who Could Ever Love a Beast,i just had to give this story a try. And i'm glad i did ) i'm looking forward to your next update! Please dont forget to update your other story as well!
autumnevening chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
aw, that is really good. man, you're such a captivating writer. I hope you have the story figured out so you can continue to write it. It's so sad when someone writes a lovely beginning but never finishes it.
Jessie My Love chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
That was proabably one of the most amazing and original fics I have ever read on fictionopress...Wow O_o that was simply amazing. I loved your description, and simply how you told the story. You have to update this!

Cooties chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Sounds like a really interesting story. I loved this, it was so beautiful and sad and sweet! Aw! So will this story tell their story again, or what is it about? Can't wait to read it!
BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Hmm... interesting... I like the names you chose. This seems to be a Japanese- themed beginning... (just pondering)... does it somehow tie into a beauty and the beast kind of story? I feel bad for Vorax- he seems like a good guy/god-thing.