Reviews for Epitaph
Vyvyan chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
It's beautiful. A nice write.
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Wow... I mean wow... This is an awesome poem, I LOVE IT! Going onto my fav's definantly! Great work!
Uriah Hamilton chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Let your epitaph be desire!
smile persephone chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
I like the narrative elements your incorporate into the poem. Your diction wonderfully complements the subject of the poem. The last line is perfection.
BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Beautiful. I love the way this flows- none of it sounds too fudged or forced- a big challenge with long poems. 'to continue along this razor wire path, /but allow me yet to choose my epitaph.' those are my two favorite lines. They sum up the whole thing in one bite. loverly.