Reviews for with you
cellulardivision chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
The last stanza was great. The third line of the first stanza is particularly powerful as well. Thanks for reviewing me! Keep up the great work!
PenguinsEvilPawn chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
I just have to say aw. I love all your work, and this one is just amazing. Good job.
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
I generally shy away from reading love poems , but I thought I'd give this one a shot, and aw... this is really sweet. What a perfect situation you have, someone who loves you and supports you, that's really great. The last two stanzas are my favorites. Wonderful job! :)
phthalo blue chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Cute poem. I love the "just-feel-good" feeling this poem gives off. And I love the last line, but I have a question. Is it meant to be that he still loves her when she cries? Or did he leave her and this was just an ironic poem?