Reviews for a december night
beatrice is hot chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
There were parts of this that were great, well-phrased, erotic, yadayadayada. Other lines, though, were maybe a little awkward.

The "(here we go again)" repetition was very effective. The James Bond simile was less so.

I haven't decided about the wordsstucktogertherlikethis part yet. My first impression: artsy, cool.
Bronzeage chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
hey maria chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Intense. Beautiful. I love it.
smile persephone chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Your repetition and meshing of words is flawless. Lovely dreamlike imagery as well. Nicely written!
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Um. Wow. Gorgeous.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
I liked this; you gave it a very breathless feeling, and I could see it all evolving before my eyes. I really enjoyed it.

a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
wow. you make me so jealous. i would never be able to write something like that&have it turn out so good... this was awesome. i loved the way you ended it... i liked the "(hear we go again)". -singsongyvoice- it madde me hapyy...yes, i'm not on my medicine right now. ; )