Reviews for spoke
Mizamour chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
Beautiful! Amazing... I love the imagery and poetic rhythm... beautiful.
thebprt chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
quite brilliant , this one. I like they way you say things simply by not saying them . Nice work.-thebprt
backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I really admire this one. It's got that... depth to it that really makes you think. Well done! And as for this 'new style': Keep it up!
PacoTheCharm chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
I love your word choice (cerulian)
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
This was very good, love the atmosphere that you created here.
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
I like that phrase, slippery-warm.
hoowdoideletethisaccount chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Hm. Hm. I don't really get it. I read it the other day, and went away and thought about it, and I still don't really get it. So he's saying her name... "slippery-warm", but biting, in each drawling syllable... and then they're being dragged along by some instinctual thing that means they did-what, I'm not quite sure. lol I feel kind of dumb. I'm sure I should get it. Oh well, I'm going to give up on understanding it, and just comment on the style ;) It's very poignant, in a kind of clipped way; like the girl is saying it sort of sarcastically, to cover up how much it means to her. I LOVE the last two lines. Definitely, to me, the culmination and peaking-point of the entire poem. Nice job, Beti! As always!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
very cool... well done
lackluster chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
sweet. i love the fact that it's so short.
Naibz chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
a kiss? very nice piece. flowed nicely.
WestviewFoxx chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
That's so cool, it doesn't matter if it's short. I love all the little ties. Keep going!~Hugglz&Pokez~