Reviews for You're Not What I Want
Kenshinswife chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
Even way back then you're poems were great! I hope this wasn't directed at me because its a really sad poem. Love it foo!
I love my purple monke chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
I like that alot, good job.
White is a Sin chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Nice sorta short and sweet. Good work.
Morwain chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
interesting
just dani chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
this is really good. u did a good job of portraying the hopelessness of someone turning out to be something else. kudos

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Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
good one! reminds me of some of mine, i hate when you want him, but you don't really, you just want who he used to be.
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Hm, the story it tells is good... but it's a bit choppy; I think because you've kept the aabbcc etc rhyme scheme, just aa is all one line and on.
xXDiaryOfAFreakXx chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
omg i love it and i kno what u coulda been feeling when u wrote it. ur a great writer.
Octello chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Wow. This is so sad and gripping. I love the feeling that it has!