Excellent! I killed myself laughing, especially after her reaction to him being a were-bat. Very good comedic writing style _

Aww, so cute... can't wait for Darren's story! I am intrigued by Orange Shirt.

LOL! Brian and September's exchanges are hilarious. I love them XD September herself is such a comedic personality...

hey hon, fyi for someone who doesnt like french you use it quite a bit...great story...look to hear from me soon I am ready to get back out there...

Hey, I was just wondering, have you ever read the Darren Shan series? :)

was darren the leader? the 1 mel was going 2 go after? oh and he's not going 2 suck them all dry is he? i hope not. thtd be mean. i luved the bit about batman, tht was so funny. and september is so weird. funny but weird. in a bit of a ditzy way. cumon ur being chased by evil villains and all u can do is laugh.

brians a bit of a showoff tho wat with the flip at the end. so typically male. brians sensitivity on not bein a vamp was cracking me up. he sounded like a little kid. so adorable. bless. anyways well done on another vey well written story. only complaint i had was tht there were quite a few typos in this chapter.

That was so sweet! And very funny. I loved it. :)

That was awesome! thanks for updating! I can't wait for Darren's story! I'll be waiting!

~Tzotel

Oh yay!

I love this story! It's so amazingly sweet. It has all the components of an amazing one: fighting, vampires, romance, and [albeit dumb] bad guys.

Yay you! Good job, really.

gorgeous, fantastic, love it!

xx

Haha, that was simply perfect; a really great short story with a nice ending (a hard thing to pull off I've noticed- though you did it very well :D)

You're really great at developing a solid plot while inserting a whole bunch of humour along the way, heh, you certainly had me laughing! I love how "Mitch" (_ too good) was always all dramatic and they were really just laughing at him. Ooh, and this was one of my favourite lines:

"Yeah, but the plot does," but could just have well have been "Yeah, cut the snot, cuz." *laugh* Brilliant.

Finally, I really liked the ending itself, as I mentionned before. It's just so sweet and cute with the whole "you forgot" part :D

Righteo, so keep up the great work, can't wait to read more from you :)

-B. Blum

I love your writing style and Septembers sence of humor is hilarious! I hope to read some more of your stories. Preferably longer...full length possibly?

See ya.

Very good. I enjoyed this one shot a lot. I hope to see these two in Darren's story. Well done.

LOVED IT!

It was hilaroius!

This was really good! You said you had a second part? where is it! I want to read it! Please post it as soon as you can! It is great!

This would also make a good story too!

~Tzotel

um... is it finished? b/c it's way after the date u published and therre isn't antoher chappie :P *plz* update! anything! (i'm hooked on all ur stories so it's all good ;D)