Reviews for As Fate Watches
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
I liked how you personified Fate. It really added to the poem. Nice work!
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
beautiful imagery in this. it's an amazing poem, great job!

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a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
"ice colored eyes" "clouds in the coffee" so many beautiful details in here. i liked it a lot. keep writing.
Bronzeage chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Very good imagery and rythmn