|Reviews for a potholed road and an apology|
| emsworth chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
like the other reviewer, i like the metaphor a lot..this one is even better on second reading. i love you!
| Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Again, your imagery and emotion is so powerful. You have this way of writing that just kind of grabs me. I love it. Keep it up.
| sweetest tangerine chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
I'm not the best at giving compliments but I really liked this and I certainly have no criticism for it.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
an interesting analogy; i especially love the last three lines. nice work.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Deep and somehow, touching, how you depend on that someone so much as to believe so much in him/her. I like how you used pits and holes as the bad times in life. Good job.