Reviews for My Bath And Me
lymli chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
sweet, playful, kinda childish.
Aomera chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
wonderfully written, love the way it dies away in length. seems such a simple topic to write about but you've done it very well, made it very interesting :D
NoMoreWords chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
this made me smile :-D
Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
lol! cute! I love it! keep writing! -Black and White Dreams/Caitlin
chocohound chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Most awesome job. I feel as if I could be there...well, maybe not BE there, that would be really creepy, but anyway, I want to take a bath now!
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
I like baths and I like your poem. Nicely done.
xHannahx chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
baths :) i've not read a poem on this subject before, but there should be more!

Han.
penname1920 chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
hahahahathis poem makes me laugh, it's so cute! reminds me of a conversation i had with my friend about showers and why some of us take so long, saying how it's a portal we get lost in.i love it!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
nice...
popprincess-angel chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
great imagery you managed to really paint a clear picture in my head
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Heylo! I'm back -'' Anyyways, I really liked this piece. It's so vivid, and so cute! I feel so bad for not being able to review you for so long -wahh- Oh well, I DO hope to see more from you soon. )

~Sumiko
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Excellent imagery! _ Heya! Haven't been around for awhile! Good poem, I like this very muchly.

~Anna~
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
lovely descriptions, cute poem. Keep up the good work!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
very vivid. i especially loved the last line. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
really liked the last three lines, they're the best. cute poem...
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