|Reviews for Fantasy|
| Saint Mo Kai chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
This is probably one of the most beautiful poems that I have read in a long while. It's so mysterious, could mean so much, yet it means something unique to each and every person who reads it. It's a fine poem to read while I'm stuck in this cold cold weather...
| Rhianika chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
I love your writing style. The description in each little bit makes it awesome to read. And the way youve seperated each stanza makes it easier to read than just a big block of text. Really nicely done. I love it!
Ps, thanks so much for the reviews :)
| Needa S chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Wow... Beautiful, excellent write. Keep up the great work you are very talented.
| BangBangYourDead chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Very pretty. You described it well!
Yeah that was my first try at a rhyme. Not my best.
| Fina Arvanthol chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Beautiful, descriptive imagery and a touching ending. I loved it! Great work!
| Arichos chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
i love the imagery in this...its delicate and descriptive...its just awesome.
| The-Original-Neko chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
wow! that a good reda not to soft or overly done jst right
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
oh, its really good. love the line- 'catching delicate promises in my hand' very good!
| frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
beautiful. 'a sweet silent veil over the land' - loved that line. this was well written and now overdone. just perfect.
| just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
this is beautiful. it has a real dreamlike quality to it. nice work :D
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
nice...I like the words flow...
| tears from heaven chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Beautiful, it really grasps the imagination. So much wonderful imigary.
| 364 unbirthdays chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
You are a beautiful writer. This poem is stunning. Lovely. Keep up the good work.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Beautifully written. I love the clear and sensual imagery in this and the words were amazing.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
I love that last line.. beautifully done.. great job