Reviews for Fantasy
King Krod von Bopper chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
perfect!

the last two lines, for me anyway, made the poem!
dooley creel chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
beautiful and sweet, but not cloying, clearly told and evocative, the rhyme and rhythm are subtle and enhance the poignant inherent sadness of the piece, none of us can dictate what is good and what is not, though we can say, " I like the writing." And I do.
Calliope Foster chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Beautiful poem! I always love snow, so you most definately hit the spot with the first few lines. Wonderfully done.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
So sweet. I love the imagery and the purity feel.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
Very cool and poignant. This is really cool and elegant. The flow sounds musical and graceful. Good job!
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
beautifully written.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
i know it doesnt have to do as much with snow, but i cant help wonder how i will react to through major personification and metaphors we all change the messagenothing can be taken away to pull away about how delicate and beautiful it is?

Beneath a shower of light so cold,-delightful
Sally-andersonn chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
This is creepy. It's so sweet and innocent i just can't help but htink that soemthing terrible would happen but it never did. :(

Anyway, It had a good flow and nice rhyme.
Aruchu-chan chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Beautiful imagery! My favorite line was "Beneath a shower of light so cold" Keep writing.
naughtgreen chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
wishes without tears...

sighs
KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
beautiful imagery, and the last verse is great!-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
Jodie Sinclair chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
wow this is great good job keep it up!
Plinky chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Beautiful.

You capture the fragility and gentleness of snoflakes so beautifully.

Lovely ending.

; )
Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Beautiful imagery as always...
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Wow, this is an awesome poem, love it!
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