Reviews for Mismatch
tearitrightup chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
one suggestion. you know how you say "he syas she's far too sexy to cuddle and she's far too cute to lay." get rid of the "she" the SECOND time that you use it. cause the rhythm is a bit weird with that word there. i LOVE that phrase. and just a suggestion.
zakei chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
lol. how ironic. but how true. always happenns, ne? *dances around you*
bulletproof.cupid chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
honestly, this reminded me of a lot of things. it's beautiful. . . and desperate. and she's so in denial (love). i don't know. . . as most of your reviewers said, perfect is the only way to describe it.
the best part of believe chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
i love those two lines: She’s far too sexy to cuddle/And she’s far too cute to lay
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
.perfect. i love "he says she's far too sexy to cuddle/and she's far too cute to lay." this is tragic because it happens so often.
Rovandin chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Humans. They're so patheticSehr Gut
roxyruth chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Wow I LOVE YOUR WAY OF WRITTING! lol I cant stop reading your stuff! It's great! Keep it up! Very original. Roxy Ruth
Blue Devil012 chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Aww, thats all I have to say x.x Guys and girls really are confusing huh?
SinCorazon chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
That was awesome. It really was, oh goodness, I love it.

"But he swears

She’s far too sexy to cuddle

And she’s far too cute to lay"

That was my favorite part, like it ties it up in the end.