Reviews for Strawberry Gashes
the reign chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
strawberry gashes is a perfect merge of words for this imagery. strawberry (being my favorite anything) brings about this sweet and innocent tone when i read it, but as soon as i saw 'gashes,' i knew something innocent went wrong.
vampy08 chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
I really liked this...it spoke to me in a way. Love it keep writing
Lady Glass chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Wow, very powerful. The rhyming every other line was excellent and the rhythm was great, I loved reading it aloud. The chorus wasn't too over-done and you only included it four times which was a little surprising, you usually include it more.

Great job!

Much love,

Lady Glass
hey maria chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
That MC P Pants is such a loser. He flamed my series "under the singing willow tree" and it was just so disgusting. Forget him.

This, by the way, is gorgeous. It flows so well and has amazing imagery. Great job.
Crimson Flowers chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Oo, innocent yet dark...I love it...Hurhur, so we both have the same enemy huh? He honestly doesn't know what he's writing! Yup, I did get a nasty review from him too. Yours truly, Crimson Flowers
MaxxRidarr chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
This was so bad I could smell it over my DSL line. Where did you pull it out of besides your ass.