|Reviews for Anger|
| Simultaneous Tick-Tocks chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
The poem was nice, though I agree with the previous reviewer. The line "for rage consumes all" throws off the rhythm a bit since it's shorter than the other lines. But good job.
| Singing After Dark chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
your theme is great. i duno, though the rhythm is a little off. You have a great choice of words so i'm not sure what you to do to change it, sorry. but i like it alot. It's just sort've choppy because the "rage consumes all" is so short and some of the lines before it are way longer. over all, nice job though.